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Fan made Avengers Doomsday Script. I know it’s not sports related but I want some feedback on my script


Scene 1:

Doctor Strange narrating: It has been 5 years since Tony Stark's Snap. The world has changed for the better. There has been ups and downs, twists and turns. There is still conflict. But this one… this could shadow all the others. The whole world, better yet our whole existence is at stake. The state of reality itself is intertwining itself with space and time of other realities. I have seen how the multiverse can be useful and promising. Like all things it can be dangerous.

Doctor Strange: It was a blood bath, worlds dying, quintillion’s lost. We couldn’t stop it. This threat would be if thanos was a paper cut. All because I was too selfish to look beyond his attacks on that dirty planet of titan.

Doctor Strange: and it all started with this one moment.

Tony Stark: I… Am… Iron Man

SNAP Scene 2:

In peter parkers apartment. Peter has been writing in his journal. He writes, it has been 4 years to the day when Dr. Strange casted the spell. I wish the people who knew who I really was from this universe knew who I am. I wish Mr. Stark could help me.

Peter: Need to get my suit on…

Meanwhile at Ned’s apartment

MJ: Ned are you ok?

Ned on the floor wheezing in pain clutching his head

Ned: My head… it feels like it’s gonna explode

MJ: Ahh!! My head

Back at Peter’s apartment:

Peter: I need to get more notebooks.

Glancing at a picture of him and Tony Stark

Peter: I wish you could see me how I am now.

Peter salutes to Mr. Stark and finishes getting his Spider-Man suit on and swings into the city at the dead of night. *

Scene 3:

Ned’s alarm gos of at 8:30 AM

Ned: Peter!

MJ waking up in some pain from the previous night’s incident.

MJ: Ned, do u remember Peter?

Ned: yes, I don’t know who he is though

MJ: It just hurts thinking about it

Ned: What you mean…

MJ falls and lands on her back

MJ: Oh… by back

Ned: You alright?

MJ rolling around on the floor trying to get the ringing out of her ear

MJ shoots up

MJ: Spider-Man!

Ned: Peter’s Spider man.

* Scene 4:

3 Hours later at Peter’s apartment

Knock knock Knock

Peter: Coming

Opens door

Peter: Ned? MJ?

Ned: The spell, everything, we remember

MJ: We don’t know how. Did you go to Doctor Strange again?

Peter: No, no. How is this possible

MJ: How are we supposed to know

Peter gos up to them and gives them a hug

Peter: I missed you guys

Ned: We missed you to

MJ: Again was this Doctor Strangest doing?

Peter: Doctor Strange would also froget about me, anyways want some coffee?

Peter grabbing a coffee mug and Peter’s notebook falls of the table.

MJ picks up the notebook

MJ: Who gave this to you?

Peter: Mr. Stark before the dusting, he gave it to me with the Iron spidy suit.

Ned: We need to go to doctor strange

* Scene 5:

Dr. Strange is talking to wong after a cosmic pulse happening the night before

Wong: Nothing of this caliber has happened since thanos

Strange: Its weaker in force but stronger energy wise

Wong: How is that possible?

Peter Parker runs in New York Sanctum

Peter: Dr. Strange, I need your help, if you dont know who I am…

Strange: I know who u are peter, why would u say i don't know who u are

Peter: Ok about 4 years ago there was a tear in the multiverse…

Wong: That has to be what the pulse was!

Dr. Strange: How would I let that happen then

Wong: Probably happened during the blip

Dr. Strange: That’s impossible, the kid was their when we got snapped back

Wong: Then what explains this

Peter: I don’t know but I think I know

Dr. Strange: You know or you don’t know. Which one is it

Peter: Both? So something happened last night

Dr. Strange: I thought we already went over that

Peter: Wait theirs more. Mr. Stark gave me this magic notebook

Wong: The dark hold?

Dr. Strange: Did it have a dark aura around it, like a pulling sensation?

Peter: it’s a regular notebook. I wrote in it then all this

Dr. Strange: What did you write?

Peter: I wish everyone before the spell knew who I am

Wong: How did Tony get this

Peter: How would I know! A gift?

America Chavez: I know what it is. It’s not what you think

Dr. Strange: How would you know Miss. Multiverse

America Chavez: you just said it, the multiverse * Scene 6:

Earth 617 Year 2016

Tony Stark: We need a iron legend

Pepper Potts: Remember what happened with ultron

Tony stark: We make it better

Pepper: it can't be done

Tony: ANYTHING CAN BE DONE! WE NEED TO PROTECT THE EARTH. REMEMBER LOKI! IT COULD HAPPEN AGAIN

Pepper: Tony calm down… 
Tony: CALM DOWN! I WILL NOT CALM DOWN. IF A COSMIC THREAT POPS UP HOW CAN WE PROTECT OURSELVES!

Tony: Friday make a prototype of a mark 46 armor for a iron legion

Friday: Why should i do that sir

Tony: We need to build a shield around the world and this is the first step

Friday: On it sir

Tony walking down the stairs

Tony: Get the old iron legion and update it

Friday: Do you think this is necessary

Tony: I do everything for a reason, if their is a reason for this it’s necessary

Friday: How should we execute this plan?

Tony: make an assembly line for them, updated the weapon system, upgraded everything!

Friday: Yes sir. Should i make it in the active projects folder

Tony: No, put it in my private file, this cant be out in the public Scene 7:

At the time before the final battle in endgame

Tony: Friday

Friday: Yes boss

Tony: Get my arc reactor thing for the new suit and put it under the rock I will be under. If everything is working it should upgrade my armor to survive the stones

Friday: Everything will be their boss, just give me the ready

Tony: Now's ready.

Right before the snap

Thanos: I… Am… Inevitable!

Snap

Thanos: Hu?

Iron Man Whispers: Friday don't respond to this but upgrade my armor to the mark 96

Tony stark's armor upgrades and the infinity stones go on his armor

Tony: And i… am.. Iron Man

Snap!

After everyone leaves

Tony: Friday, separate yourself from my earth ai and become ECHO

Friday is updating to become the more powerful ECHO

ECHO: Update complete sir

Tony: Good, now get the suit ready for space travel

Tony updates his armor to mark 96

ECHO: Were to sir?

Tony: Bring me to my factory on morag * Scene 8:

Earth 828

Reid Richards talking to the fantastic 4

Reed Richards: There has been a cosmic pulse but from where?

Ben Grimm: it must be Jonny playing around with the equipment

Jonny: At least I don’t crush the tech when I try to use it

Jonny and Ben arguing in the background

Reid is looking at his research on the multiverse

Sue: Can you stop for a minute

Reid: I’m coming so close

Sue: Let’s focus on finding Franklin, not finding weird pulses

Reid: This will find Franklin

Sue: ok Reid, but you need to take a break

Reid: Fine

Beep

Reid looks at the make shift computer

Reid: It’s multiversal pulse * Scene 9:

Universe 617 Year 2027

Dr. Doom/Tony Stark: Everything is great

ECHO: Are you sure you have been a great influence

Dr. Doom: Yes, i have stopped any threats before it happens

ECHO: You have killed trillions

Dr. Doom: FOR THE PROTECTION OF THE INNOCENT!

ECHO: When you killed them they were innocent

Dr. Doom: They were a threat in the future, i have made galaxy’s better with the Doom army

ECHO: Doom?

 Dr. Doom: Yes the Defence Of Others Military

ECHO: Were using acronyms now

Dr. Doom: It sounds cooler than the iron legend

ECHO: Why are you doing this

Dr. Doom: I'm doing this for morgan. I want her to be in a universe that is safe

ECHO: By making yourself dangerous

Dr. Doom: No by enhancing the universe's safety. Sometimes you need to do things for the greater good

ECHO: That was what thanos was doing

Dr. Doom: AT LEAST I'M NOT MURDERING A HALF OF THE UNIVERSE!

ECHO: You are making this worse for yourself. You are losing your ways

Dr. Doom: Jarvis shut down

ECHO: Shutting down…

Dr. Doom: Good thing I had this as a backup. Ultron take over everything jarvis was apart of

Ultron: Yes sir, powering up

Dr. Doom: This time don't go crazy

Ultron: Tony whats my first mission

Dr. Doom: First I'm making you back into a Robot-Human Hybrid thing, but remember… u listen to me. * Scene 10:

Ultron: On your quest for “Universal Safety,” there will be a lot of problems.

Doom: We address our threats, destroy them, and then move on.

Ultron: You want balance?

Doom: No… more like a working order, no crime, no intergalactic threats. Nothing but peace

Ultron: Peace can mean many things. Tony

Doom: I remember when we had opposing ideals, but now I see where you are heading.

Ultron: Back to threats, the number one threat to earth is the Avengers.

Ultron: After that, using our…

Doom: Mine, not yours. You're a robot.

Ultron: Yes, your army—we take over Earth and rebuild it to how we seek.

Doom: So we will build a Death Star. Emperor Palpatine, we’re building another one.

Ultron: That could work.

Doom: No! We are not destroying earth. We are liberating and restoring. To do that we need…

Ultron: We need what?

Doom: This is the part where you make a “plan.”

Ultron: We need to build a task force to invade. Remember the chitari.

Doom: I would like to forget.

Ultron: Oh, there are some enemies that we can turn into allies.

Doom: Strange. Thank you, metalhead, but you need to get the interdimensional portal working.

Ultron: Already getting handled, sir.

Doom: As long as we return that cube when we’re done, no damage. Also ultron, go back and see if they really got the cube

Ultron gos onto the platform and escapes in time

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